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The sixth of an eight-day practice celebrating National Poetry Month and inspired by Br. David's appreciation of and experience with haiku.
The Haiku is, paradoxically, a poem about silence. Its very core is silence. ~ Br. David Steindl-Rast
The Haiku is, paradoxically, a poem about silence. Its very core is silence.
~ Br. David Steindl-Rast
In his book, A Listening Heart: The Spirituality of Sacred Sensuousness, Br. David Steindl-Rast writes:
The Haiku is, paradoxically, a poem about silence. Its very core is silence. There is probably no shorter poetic form in world literature than the classical Haiku with its seventeen syllables and, yet. The masters put these seventeen syllables down with a gesture of apology, which makes it clear that the words merely serve the silence. All that matters is the silence. The Haiku is a scaffold of words; what is being constructed is a poem of silence; and when it is ready, the poet gives a little kick, as it were, to the scaffold. It tumbles, and silence alone stands.
Haiku by Br. David Steindl-Rast
We can almost hear the first big raindrops falling one by one. But this is already the moment after the decisive one; the moment after the one that held its breath in limitless anticipation. This is not a poem about rain, but about the silence before the rain. A strange poem, the Haiku! It zeroes in on the here and now which is nowhere. It celebrates the all-oneness of aloneness in all the bliss of its poignant pain. It stakes out territory for discovery precisely where life is most daily. And while setting up landmarks of adventure, it wipes out its own footprints. It denies itself. For it shoots words like arrows at the target of silence. Every word that hits the mark returns to the silence out of which it has come.
Today we invite you to explore silence around and within your haiku. How might every word that speaks to us then return to the silence from which it has arisen, leaving us touched but not taken away from our experience?
This is an experiment in full-bodied listening. An exploration of the silence through which words (and all else) arise. Don’t think too much about this but rather tap into the open space of wonder as you play with words and how words coexist with the absence of words. If it helps to reread the passage by Br. David above a few times and feel into what he is pointing at, please do.
When you are ready, write your haiku in a notebook and/or share it below along with any reflections about your experience.
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Coffee cup in hand, I take the first sip — Ah! I smile In the morning quiet.
deep silence the shrill of cicadas seeps into rocks
—Matsuo Bashō (1644–94)
Up early today First contemplation After busy dreaming night
This was just going to be a title then haiku: there it is! Here is what came to mind upon first reading today’s exercise.
The space between thoughts Ground, path, result Refuge in every step
knj 4/16/19
Spring has sprung today, lots of noisy, noisy birds. And silence beyond.
Silence gives meaning Context, contrast, communion Being expression.
offering candles— rows of tiny lights. Sun streams through the ruined roof.
My ears are alert To the tiniest sound wave Only my head rings
Silence between notes Sometimes brief sometimes long Turn sound into music
Empty sky A bird wings through No spire to land on
Daddy does not but she waits patiently trusting the world now has claws
April’s sun, rain, meet winter-washed branch, dead grass: wonderment of green.
Skim the flattest stone Leaps across the vast-wide-deep potential ripples
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